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大儿子在学校写的诗(图)


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我的大儿子十二岁了。这是一篇他在学校写的诗叫“IAm”。这种诗体是在说一个东西,你猜猜是什么?

I Am

 

I am great and powerful.

 

I wonder about my ability to move others to the point to take action.

 

I hear things being spoken in a gentle calm like springs gale.

 

I see flowing lines of letters that break in overwhelming emotion.

 

I want to see many of us being used to bring equality to this world.

 

I am great and powerful.

 

I pretend I am a flowing poem and end in a powerful line.

 

I feel good when I am spoken to a crowd thundering in cheers.

 

I touch the hearts of many when the day comes when poems are great.

 

I worry about being sent into silence.

 

I cry when no one speaks out against the injustice of silence.

 

I am great and powerful.

 

I understand the hearts of many and fill their accommodations.

 

I say that the day that we rule will be the day many will rise.

 

I dream that we will be understood by all and many.

 

I try to make the world one that not only do we believe but open the world to many.

 

I hope that we become more than letters on a page and we are open to the ideas of many.

 

I am great and powerful.

 

 

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  • 无根草
    桑妮,
    谢谢,祝你母亲节快乐!

    转悠,
    我儿子刚刚满十二岁,我让他晚上了一年学,所以他现在才五年级,秋天会上中学了。
    也祝你母亲节快乐!
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  • 转悠
    无根草,你儿子的写作真是很好,写的那么流畅。没准和我女儿同一个年级 -- 七年级,明天让女儿到你这儿来学习、学习。

    祝母亲节快乐!
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  • 桑妮
    草儿:好久不见,问候一声。十二岁的孩子,能写这么美的诗句,真不得了。
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  • 无根草
    欣岸,
    母亲节快乐!
    谢谢鼓励!这首诗里的“I”小作者说是“Words”。
     
    叶子,
    我也很喜欢这首诗。他这一次写了十三首呢。我想再挑一两首贴上来。

    母亲节快乐!
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  • 叶子
    草儿,喜欢这诗,特别是那句 “I pretend I am a flowing poem and end in a powerful line.” 的确是充满诗意。

    母亲节快乐!
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  • 欣岸
    草儿,你的儿子有着良好的感觉和向上的心,“I am great and powerful.”

    祝你这个妈妈母亲节快乐!
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