试英译爪四哥博《秋念：写给大洋彼岸的母亲》
昨天看到博主爪四哥新贴的一首小诗，深受感动，即兴译成英语作为留言。现作为博文发出，稍稍改动了几个词。并在此感谢爪四哥博给我们带了这首情深意重的好诗。
爪四哥原诗：
秋念：写给大洋彼岸的母亲
秋深霜重叶红处
碧水连天
扶杖远瞩
银鸥舞白发
娘不哭
年年望穿秋水
怕儿忘穿秋裤
英译 by 沐岚
Longing in Autumn: To My Mom Overseas
Into autumn deep
When frost becomes heavy and leaves crimson,
The emerald water shimmers to the horizon.
Who leans on a walking-stick
Gazing afar by the water
Is my mom,
In the wind her white-hair stirring,
The silver seagulls dance.
She doesn't weep,
She longs for her son overseas
Year after year,
Having concern for him
To put not on the warm trousers.
海天博的译作：
Hoary grass glowing, crimson leaves falling
The autumn goes deep
Emerald water rippling, silver gulls lazing
Gray hair blows in the wind
Leaning on a stick, gazing afar
There stands my mom
Year after year, eyes worn cold N’ sad
Son yet in sight
No tears shed, no ease in mind:
May the long johns keep my son snug.
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图片去年此时摄于尼亚加拉大佛林岛
